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SIS Book 2 Chapter 22: Changes and Chicken [First Draft]

 

"You can't arrest Daddy, he did nothing wrong!" Fiona abruptly shouted as her eyes started to water up.

Daz looked somewhat bothered by this, but he continued to disregard the teenager. "Crusher?"

The tall Titan grinner and said,...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 21: Stats and Arrest [First Draft]

 

There were nine bodies that had started to slowly decay being stored inside of one of Fort Skip's closed shipping containers. Three of them belonged to the Higher Devils, five were the Monster Dogs and the last was the Demon Lord's mutilated...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 63: Mythic and Forfeit [First Draft]

 

"Mr Immortus-ss?" Swind asked. Rare was it that Lone would talk to Swind outside of meal times unless it was something important.

"Give me that sword of yours," Lone ordered.

"Of course." Swind didn't hesitate for a second and he...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 62: Absorption and Redesigning [First Draft]

 

"Now this a fight that I can enjoy! I won't go easy on you just because you're a kid, Eight-tails! I'm gonna go all out! As a fellow A-ranker, give me a good fight!" the Demon Princess loudly shouted as she gripped her legendary-rated greats...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 20: Rankings and Moustache [First Draft]

 

Reika had returned to her astral form and was sitting on Daz's head again. The Reaper had gone to his personal training area and was fully intent on having the demon princess teach him the swordsmanship of the hero she once controlled. He wa...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 19: Reika and Hamson [First Draft]

 

Daz opened his eyes and groggily got out of bed while leaving the still asleep Madison alone. He went to the kitchen and made himself a cup of coffee. Now sat in the living room, Daz began thinking to himself. 

'So that skill,...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 61: Round-1 and Growling [First Draft]

 

The fights proceeded smoothly after Sophie and Falin's eventful match. Gradually, people stopped looking at Sophie and Lone and started to enjoy the displays of combat capabilities being presented to them. There was much to learn from watchi...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 18: Passion and Underwhelmed [First Draft]

A/N: As I said on my discord, sorry for the delay, I've been ill since Sunday evening.

 

Daz, having rested for a short while after his trip to the Court of Lords, immediately went to find Sandy in order to deal with the issue of housing...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 60: Flaying and Cringe [First Draft]

 

For once, it wasn't Sophie that was using Lone to hide from her stress and insecurities, but rather the other way around. Ignoring all of the strange glances he was getting, Lone had sat on the floor and forced Sophie onto his lap. His arms ...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 17: Citizens and Peace [First Draft]

 

Lyle stared at the needle on the table in front of him with downcast eyes. "... Just what am I doing with myself?"

He peeled his gaze away from the syringe and the small bag of unidentifiable substance before he looked up at the ceilin...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 59: Escape and B-Rank [First Draft]

 

The character test proceeded smoothly and once again, whether by coincidence or not, Lone was the only remaining person who had yet to be tested by Elder Talion.

Swind had been given a low pass due to how passive he was in most situati...

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Follow-up on the poll.

I have decided after reading your comments and seeing the results of the poll thus far that I'll continue writing at least 2 (hopefully 3) chapters per week for LTW until book 3 is finished. Once book 3 is finished, I shall take a break from LTW to w...

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A Difficult Decision Regarding LTW.

I have come to a point where I feel like I want to stop writing LTW for now and focus on a newer idea. I really want to write and flesh out my other story, 'Hello, You're Through To Hades, How Can I Help You Today?'

So in summary, I'd like to put L...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 16: Storybooks and Deranged [First Draft]

 

Two years had passed since Daz and Madison had started going to elementary school, and it was currently the middle of summer vacation. Daz's mother had arranged a simple apartment for him to live in on the orders of her husband and a very sm...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 58: Character and Morals [First Draft]

 

Time flowed on after that and every one of Lone's companions were given a passing grade thus far. The only ones who hadn't been tested yet were Swind and Rachel.

Sophie had displayed her barrier magic and was given a perfect passing gr...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 15: Rocky and Vincent [First Draft]

A/N: A loupe is a jewellers pair of glasses meant for inspecting gems closely. 


The first thing Daz did when he had returned to Fort Skip was giving every otherworlder and the group of five teens an identification medallion. After h...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 57: Healing and Shan'len [First Draft]

 

No one disagreed with King Ele'hunda's declaration regarding skills, so one by one, people went up to display their abilities. Most of the Elves were displaying their best archery-related skills or scouting skills, which didn't interest Lone...

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Update.

Sorry for my lack of posts last week. I had a bit of writer's block and I was busy finalising my transition to self-employment.

Starting from this week, I plan to write (hopefully) 3 chapters per week per story for you patrons while RRL will only g...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 14: Bravery and Captives [First Draft]

 

The first thing Daz did was use his higher identification skill on the Demon Lord to assess his strength.

Stegrum's Status

Basic Information

Name: Stegrum

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 13: Teens and Cages [First Draft]

 

"Damn it! Quickly, avoid it, Ben!" a short dark-skinned teen shouted to his friend as he blocked the attack from the high devil that was stood in front of him.

Eight-feet-tall, jet-black skin, two-foot long horns and claws the size of ...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 56: Perfect and Flawless [First Draft]

 

Eolande floated up to Elder Foru with absolutely no enthusiasm and looked straight into his eyes. "Make it fast, I'm already bored," she ordered him lazily.

Elder Foru was enraged, but he wasn't a match for Eolande and King Ele'hunda h...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 12: Books and Bonus [First Draft]

 

"Let's stop staring at it and actually conquer it. If we're lucky, there might be other powerful survivors in there as well," Daz said with some greed in his voice.

"Looking to recruit them?" Crusher asked.

"Don't be stupid," Daz...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 11: Pursuer and Replacement [First Draft]

 

"Four quests? System, please show me my quests," Daz asked after hearing that he had already gained a few quests somehow despite not doing anything.


Confirmed. Displaying the user's quest list.


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LTW Book 3 Chapter 55: Passing and Failing [First Draft]

 

Fep got onto the stage and Elder Foru wasted no time before he started the test. He closed his eyes and raised his arms in Fep's direction before mumbling in an ancient language that only he was familiar with.

A few seconds passed and ...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 10: Dungeon and Medals [First Draft]

 

"So what you're saying is, there's a wild event in the Waterford City Centre Mall?" Daz asked his sister, Rose who was busily tapping away on her keyboard as usual. The two were sat at a table that Sandy had created for fun a couple of days ...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 54: Sarcasm and Age [First Draft]

 

Some more time had passed, and finally, it was Rachel's turn to get tested. She was the last person from Lone's group except for Lone himself to be called up.

She slowly and nervously walked up to the stage and she had to hold herself ...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 9: Useless and Bullies [First Draft]

 

"You useless wench!" a middle-aged woman screamed as she slapped her young four-year-old daughter across the face, forcing the young child's body the slump onto the floor.

"The Hamilio bloodline! The Hamilio bloodline! You waste o...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 53: Provocation and Obnoxious [First Draft]

 

Everyone could feel that Swind hadn't awakened either of his mana organs, but that wasn't the reason that Lone was concerned. 'That orb can detect if he has the potential to use magic, right? I really hope he gets at least one point...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 52: Tests and Falin [First Draft]

 

Lone quickly approached the monk called Eko and hugged him. Naturally, Eko returned the gesture and laughed. 

"It's good to see you, Lone! I see you're improved greatly since our last meeting! To think you're a C-Ranker now... I w...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 8: Quests and Announcements [First Draft]

 

Daz entered the smithy and was surprised to see that the five blacksmiths and the master blacksmith weren't Humans. "Gnomes, not Dwarfs?"

The one-feet tall and slightly chubby men and women quickly rushed towards Daz and circled him wh...

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