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LTW Book 3 Chapter 51: Demon and Changeling [First Draft]

 

"This place is really empty, huh?" Lone said as he looked around the Manor that was supposedly home for the new Keepers.

Letty, who had commandeered Kyuubi's back, much to the dismay of Eolande, scoffed and lazily replied, "Of course i...

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Announcement.

As stated on RRL, from this point on, I will be doing 2 chapters per week for both stories but the work count will be going up to at least 2,000 per chapter. Chapter 7 of SIS is sitting at 2,218 words and is the largest chapter ever for either of the...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 7: Barracks and Smithy [First Draft]

 

Daz and Ellie made their way to the exterior of Fort Skip and the two separated. Ellie had to focus on using her merit points since she had been too worried about Daz to spend the majority of them until now, and with his encouragement, she w...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 6: Rebuilding and Status [First Draft]

 

Daz and Ellie made their way down the ramparts, and before long, the two were stood in front of the small cabin that was partially destroyed by the final Automaton boss. Ten men and woman were busily moving as Sandy directed them. "I noticed...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 50: Letty and King [First Draft]

 

"So, Tal'hat'mata, mmm, that name's a mouthful for a non-native speaker like myself, can I just call you Tal?" Lone asked the Elven beauty as his group followed her through the luxurious city that expanded through the World Tree's branc...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 49: Sickness and Tal'hat'mata [First Draft]

 

"Is this the top? Why didn't Lipsilk bring us here directly?" Lone asked after he rubbed his eyes are adjusted himself to the sudden change in locations. For some reason, he felt queasy and abruptly fell to his knees before violently vomitin...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 5: Lightning and Need [First Draft]

 

In the Richies room in their shared cabin, Ger approached and sat next to Ellie who had her head down and was staring at the floor. "Ellie, what's wrong? You've been sulking here all morning. Shouldn't you be happy now that Daz is awake agai...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 48: Portal and Interval [First Draft]

 

"This is amazing," Lone exclaimed as he looked at the city that was sprawled out before him. Inside of the World Tree lay a massive settlement of Wood Elves, as made obvious by the curved and wooden styled homes and buildings. However, Lone ...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 4: Cute and Tower [First Draft]

A/N: I've been very busy this week trying to set myself up as self-employed with financial support from an enterprise to fill in what I'm not earning from here to survive off of. (Not complaining, love you all. Just explaining why there was so little...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 3: Watermelon and Whiskey [First Draft]

 A/N: This chapter took me way to long to write and I kept getting stuck so this will be the last chapter of the week. Hopefully, I can do three per story next week. Sorry about this.


"Seriously, where is everyone?" Daz asked rhetor...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 47: Itchy and Plans [First Draft]

 A/N: Bit of a short one. One of the characters here is very hard to understand. Try to figure out what he said by the other character's thoughts and responses please.


A darkly lit and seemingly abandoned mineshaft was currently bei...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 46: Lipsilk and Ythmagobla [First Draft]

 

"So this is a World Tree, huh?" Lone marvelled at the sight before him.

A trunk so large you couldn't even see the end of it. It was like looking at a never-ending wall of bark. If Lone craned his neck, he could see that the tree went ...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 2: Gestures and Broken [First Draft]

 

Dorian tossed and turned in his bed sheets. 'I can't sleep.'

He was naturally too anxious. It had nearly been two and a half days now, but he still couldn't fall asleep. His mind wouldn't allow him. Dorian finally ga...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 45: Oars and Youths [First Draft]

 

Somewhere in an unknown ocean, two Dwarfs and a Purity Dragonkin were sat in a rowboat while the older Dwarf of the two rowed it calmly. He seemed to be enjoying himself as he watched his Purity Dragonkin friend sweat while talking to a rela...

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An update.

As you might have read on RRL, I am taking a couple of days to unwind and relax. There will only be 1 LTW chapter this week and maybe 1 more for SIS. For more information, see 2018-03-02 23:50:00 +0000 UTC View Post

SIS Book 2 Chapter 1: Beater and Titan [First Draft]

 

"Are you sure you won't be staying with us? A lunatic like him doesn't deserve someone as brave as you by his side," General Miller said to Crusher, who had just woken up after several hours of sleep.

Crusher grinned before r...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 44: Flames and Victim [First Draft]

 Fire Magic Skill: Flame Cloak

Allows the User to gather the prime essence of the Fire Magic affinity and use it to cloak the User in flames, boosting all Fire Magic by 15%.

Cost: ...

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SIS Book 2 Prologue: Aila and Punishment [First Draft]

A/N: A bit short, but it is the prologue, so apologies for that. 


A young boy, no older than six, got out of his luxurious bed and dressed himself. He had an expressionless look on his plain face and he looked very bored with everyt...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 43: Gluttony and Counter [First Draft]

 

Lone instantly knew he couldn't dodge or block the one-hundred fireballs, so he channelled his mana into Dawn and created several lighting waves, each of which built up behind him to create an even more powerful lightning wave. 

L...

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SIS Book 1 Epilogue: Puzzle and Dream [First Draft]

 

Ellie stalked off the ramparts with a downcast look on her face. She didn't speak any further and just left without saying any further words. Madison looked at her curiously. "New Girlfriend?" she asked with a tilt of her head, making h...

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Another Announcement.

Hey! I'm going to try to commission at least 1 piece of artwork per month or per second month and all of you lovely patrons will get access to any of that artwork 1 month before the public will on RRL!

Just figured that since I lowered the goal rew...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 96: Struggle and Madison [First Draft]

 "No, don't buy it yet. System, please show me the skill first," Daz replied to the system's confirmation window. The system complied and displayed the skill to Daz.


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LTW Book 3 Chapter 42: Exaggerations and Flames [First Draft]

 

"I see...so you will be taking both of them?" Lossa said to Al'ka and the Elven woman who were both sat across from her.

Al'ka nodded his head. "That's right, Clan Elder. Naturally, we won't treat Miss Rachel any worse than we plan to ...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 95: Tears and Hope [First Draft]

 

Daz slowly opened his eyes. 'Where am I?'

He looked around in a bit of a daze. 'This is my room...I...I'm not dead? How?'

Daz tried to shift his body up to get a better look at his surroundings, but he...

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Announcement.

I have edited the goals to be more realistic since I struggle to write more than my usual 6 chapters per week (3 per fic). 

To summarise the changes, my end goal for the $10 tier is now 12 early chapters, not 17, and the $1,000 goal reward of ...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 41: Strings and Rachel [First Draft]

 

Lone was stunned after having heard what weapon Swind wanted to train in. His chosen weapon was strings. How was Lone supposed to teach him anything related to fighting with strings? Lone had a very basic understanding of sword fighting and ...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 94: Defeat and Slice [First Draft]

 

The two gargantuan Automatons immediately began charging their lasers. Daz wasted no time and got Rimmy to throw him even though the lasers took roughly thirty seconds to charge up.

"SHOVEL SMASH!" The blood-red Hamson crashed into the...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 40: History and Scarf [First Draft]

A/N: Decided to name the pagoda where Tiera and Trella's parents were the Pagoda of Passing. This is also a bit of an expo heavy chapter, but we're done with all the talking and what not for now....I think?


 

Lossa spent the n...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 93: Plan and Deadlift [First Draft]

Daz saw that the Tank class Automaton was ignoring him and readjusted its arm before it began charging it's laser once more. "Crusher!" he yelled.

"What?!" she screamed back. Just like Daz, she was anxious and felt like the destruction of Fort Skip...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 39: Binding and Acceptance [First Draft]

 

"You can't seriously be expecting me to eat my own footwear, could you?" For once in his life, Brahman Elksworth, a worldwide famous soul oracle, was nervous.

"Lone-ro, please show some respect for Lord Elksworth. He is still a ve...

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