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Alright, alright, alright, there are a lot of really good suggestions floating around. What do you guys think of me scrapping this poll, and allowing you guys to brainstorm some good names for about an hour(here and on the thread) before placing t...

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Paul is given the name after a staged...

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Paul's First Cape Name

The PRT/Media has been unable to communicate this mysterious cape wreaking havoc on Brockton's Bay's criminal underbelly. They still need to give him a name, however, and decided on the alias...

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RWD: 2.x (Prelude)

2.x (Prelude)

The apartment was silent, insulated from the sirens that still wept intermittently across the city. Clean lines, minimalist decor, steel and glass reflecting the muted glow of the skyline beyond the armoured ...

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RWD: 1.x (Interlude)(Piggot)

1.x (Interlude)(Piggot)

The call confirming the Ward’s status came precisely two minutes after Glory Girl had arrived at Brockton General, according to the time stamp on Dragon’s initial alert. Gallant. Dean Stansfield...

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RWD: 1.x (Interlude)(Victoria)

1.x (Interlude)(Victoria)

The city felt thin tonight, stretched taut like old elastic about to snap. Brockton Bay always had an edge, that low thrum of something about to go wrong, but this was different. Sharper. The air ...

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RWD: 1.x (Interlude)(Kayden)

1.x (Interlude)(Kayden)

Cold seeped into Kayden’s bones, a damp chill that had nothing to do with the persistent drizzle and everything to do with the black, glassy substance encasing half her body. It felt like ice, drinking the meagre ...

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RWD: 1.10

1.10

“Hard tasks need hard ways.”

—GOD EMPEROR, LETO II

The purloined jeep handled sluggishly, its suspension groaning under the added weight of salvaged weaponry and the inert, g...

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RWD: 1.09

1.09

“Don't sit with your back to any doors.”

—GURNEY HALLECK

The world returned as a suffocating pressure, a liquid weight crushing lungs accustomed to air, however thin or pollu...

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RWD: 1.08

1.08

“There is in all things a pattern that is part of our universe. It has symmetry, elegance, and grace - these qualities you find always in that the true artist captures. You can find it in the turning of ...

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RWD: 1.07

1.07

“A process cannot be understood by stopping it. Understanding must move with the flow of the process, must join it and flow with it.”

—FIRST LAW OF MENTAT

Paul stepped out of...

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RWD: 1.06

1.06

“Science is made up of so many things that appear obvious after they are explained.”

—SUK DOCTOR YUEH

The dawn crept through Brockton Bay like diluted iodine, thin and vaguel...

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RWD: 1.05

1.05

“A killer with the manners of a rabbit - this is the most dangerous kind.”

—GOD EMPEROR, LETO II

The Veder apartment drifted in midnight torpor: a pulse of refrigerator freon...

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RWD: 1.04

1.04

“Highly organized research is guaranteed to produce nothing new.”

—GOD EMPEROR, LETO II

The house lay in weekend stillness—pipes ticking, refrigerator sighing, the city’s...

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TGW - Chapter Twenty-Five: The Siege of Braavos(Pt. 2)

Chapter Twenty-Five:  The Siege of Braavos (Pt. 2)

Ash drifted upon the lagoon like black snow, settling in the gutters and on the tiled roofs that had not yet caught. From the highest balcony of the Sarren manse, Jac...

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RWD: 1.03

1.03

“Beginnings are such delicate times.”

—PRINCESS IRULAN

The hour before dawn possessed a hush that Brockton Bay seldom granted—a stillness broken only by the faint whirr of ...

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RWD: Teaser

I drafted a cool scene for Refrain, but I'm not sure if it would make the final edit. Decided to post it here for your general enjoyment:

“Your bravado might’ve been impressive, had I not been able to smel...

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TBOV: Chapter Twenty-Five:  The Siege of Braavos (PT. 1)

Chapter Twenty-Five:  The Siege of Braavos (PT. 1)

“The tones, the timbre, the subtleties—they are a secret language all their own.”

―Frank Herbert, Dune

The city of Braa...

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TBOV: Chapter Twenty-Four: The Great Burning

Chapter Twenty-Four: The Great Burning

An Extract from A Chronicle of the Dragon’s March East

compiled in the 132nd year since Aegon’s Landing by Archmaester Haradric of the Jade Quill, Keeper of Ships’ Log...

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TBOV: Chapter Twenty-Three: Eastward Expansion

Chapter Twenty-Three: Eastward Expansion

“The horselords come, we give them gifts, the horselords go.”

―Qavo Nogarys to Haldon

Ghoyan Drohe had been dead a thousand years, yet t...

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TBOV: Chapter Twenty-Two: Spring Sorrow

Chapter Twenty-Two: Spring Sorrow

“Valyrian steel was always costly, but it became considerably more so when there was no more Valyria, and the secret of its making were lost.”

―George R. R. Martin

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RWD: 1.02

1.02

“My lungs taste the air of Time,

Blown past falling sands…”

—GURNEY HALLECK

Paul dreamed.

He dreamed of blood and desert wind, of arid sands stretching to the horizon, awash in ...

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Priority listing

I’m running a quick poll to find out which story you’d prefer me to update more often—Arcane Disorder or Refrain. I have three writing days per week to split between these two (the other three go to TGW, and I keep one day off for myself). W...

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RWD: 1.01

1.01

“Survival is the ability to swim in strange water.”

—BENE GESSERIT AXIOM

He woke into darkness.

Not the comforting dark of sietch caverns hidden beneath dune-scoured deserts, nor even t...

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RWD: ARC 1

ARC 1

The bell rang, a dull clang that echoed through Winslow High's corridors like a hammer striking warped steel. I shoved my notebook into my bag and stood up to head for my next class. Yesterday had been a blur. I was still running on ...

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Refrain

In the hidden corridors of time and mind lies the great gamble. So it was that Paul Atreides—Muad'Dib, the one foretold as Kwisatz Haderach—steeped his soul in the Water of Life. Yet where he should have emerged to the familiar spice-laden dus...

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AD: Chapter Six

Chapter Six

I lingered a short while at Wort’s workshop, well after the clockwork alarm had rasped its sour warning to go home. The clients had already left, a hush settling among the dormant tools and half-finished cont...

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AD: Chapter Five

Chapter Five

I was still tightening the final bolt on an old and battered prosthetic leg when the clockwork alarm wheezed out its mechanical chime: a rasping series of clicks that ended in a shrill ding. The resulting groa...

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TBOV: Chapter Twenty-One: The Watchers of the East

Chapter Twenty-One: The Watchers of the East

“I have my own kingdom here.”

―Saera, when asked if she meant to return to Westeros

The sun hung low over Sunspear’s spires when Qoren Martell stepped onto the gran...

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TBOV: INTERLUDE: Among Us

INTERLUDE: Among Us

“Each of them bears the mark, each has been tested under the ritual. Each would gladly give his life for you, Muad'Dib.”

―Stilgar

For a time, the hall under the House of Black and White lay a...

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