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(new) 18 - Progress

Elise was floating on the ceiling of the cabin, watching as the scene from that night played out. She watched the warg shatter the cabin’s defenses and burst inside. She watched Corwin and Sylvanna’s futile attempt to fight back. Most of all, ...

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(new) 17 - Mana

“You can’t just absorb more mana,” explained Jens. “Not without a skill for it, at least.”

“Well, that’s how I do it,” said Sindri.

“It’s not,” said Jens. “That’s just how you think you do it. Absorbing mana i...

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(new) 16 - Learning

I am uploading all the new chapters right now. I'm still working on the edits to existing chapters. I was hoping to have them all done by tonight, but it's looking like I'm going to need to rewrite most of chapter 18 (the old chapter 18), so i...

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(new) 15 - Decisions

This is the first new chapter. As I mentioned in the note on the last chapter, this one should clear up some questions that were left unanswered in the original version.

“So far? Nothing. Nothing has been decided. It’s too diffi...

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(edited) 14 - Dwarves

Alright, saying "edited" is a bit of a stretch on this one. The only thing that changed was the end, and all I did was lop the end off and replace it with a single paragraph. However, despite being so small, this is simultaneously the biggest ...

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46 - Resolve

This is one of the chapters I felt I would have liked to have the edits out before posting. It still works, but the manipulation that Elise is apologizing for wasn't shown a whole lot in the original draft. The new edits will show a lot more o...

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45 - Insecurity

I underestimated the scale of the edits. Or maybe I overestimated myself. Either way, they're going to take a few more days. Hopefully by the time the next chapter is out. I read through and edited this chapter a little bit, but it may see a f...

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44 - Treaty

Edit: removed former author's note regarding edits. Updated chapter to include Olvir's name.

Leaving a relatively defenseless rabbit alone in a room full of people who most likely wanted to kill her was not what Elise ...

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43 - Freddy

“Freddy,” said Elise. 

“Hello, Elise,” he said. “I didn’t think we’d be seeing each other again so soon.”

“Neither did I.”

Elise’s mind was racing at a hundred miles an hour trying to figure out how bes...

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42 - Aftermath

I'll have the current stat sheet out about 1.5 hours or so after this goes live. I forgot to screenshot it beforehand, and I can't do it properly from my laptop, so it will have to wait until I get home from class

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Stat Sheet - Chapter 37

Edit: I have updated Fey Bargaining to level 14. More importantly, I have also retconned {Charm} to be much higher level. This leveling happened with the dwarves. This retcon is part of some of the developmental edits that I plan on making in the ...

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(edited) 41 - Deal

Patch Notes:

  • Literally nothing. Just changed the chapter number

“Wh-where did they go?” said one of the drow. 

The three scouts started looked around frantically, before getting in a d...

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(edited) 40 - Betrayal

Patch notes:

  • Literally nothing. Just changed the chapter number

Elise had discovered with her experiment with Naomi that her divine power would last about ten minutes. That meant that she only had fi...

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Chapter 35 slightly delayed

Chapter 35 is going to be a couple hours late. I noticed a minor issue with it as I was doing a quick readthrough before scheduling it, but I have class in 15 minutes, so I don't have time to fix it right now. I'll get it done as soon as I'm out o...

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(edited) 39 - Savior

Patch notes:

  • Literally nothing. Just changed the chapter number

About twenty seconds after she left Emilia, Elise realized that she had no idea where she was going. She knew Naomi had gone out, but w...

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(edited) 38 - Sleep

Patch notes:

  • Literally nothing. I just changed the chapter number

Elise was in her classroom again, this time alone. The windows showed nothing but blackness outside, and all the lights were off save...

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(edited) 37 - Calm

Patch notes:

  • Almost nothing

Emilia didn’t seem to notice that Elise had woken up yet, so she took the opportunity to check her status window. Everything was the same as it was, except {Rune of Fate...

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(edited) 36 - Day

Patch Notes:

  • Added a line to the end to show Elise thinking that she specifically doesn't want to lose her memories.

  • Adds vision turning gold before going dark when Jerry's memory magic hits her

    <...

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(edited) 35 - Lesson

Patch Notes:

  • Removed some of Elise's doubts about seeing the Grays, since it was basically copy pasted into the earlier edited chapters.

“Lesson Day?” asked Elise, stretching. “What’s that?...

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(edited) 34 - Warg

Patch notes:

  • Basically nothing

It looked exactly how she remembered it. It had the same pure white fur, the same pale red eyes, the same massive paws, and the same cold aura. Their eyes almost met an...

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(edited) 33 - Ostra

Patch notes:

  • Timeline fix

After two and a half months underground, the sun was blinding. It took Elise many minutes for her eyes to adjust to the sudden influx of light, and when they finally did, ev...

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(edited) 32 - Party

Patch notes:

  • Basically nothing

Two Omnivorous Cyclops cows were glaring at each other in a field. Neither moved a muscle. Around them, the rest of their herd had formed a ring, and were watching clos...

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Stat Sheet - Chapter 27

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(edited) 31 - Emilia

Patch Notes:

  • Fixed timeline

Hovering right behind her was Emilia wearing a broad smile. Elise leapt from her branch and used {Dash} to get away as fast as she could, until she looked back and saw tha...

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Stat Sheet - Chapter 25

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(edited) 30 - Poison

Patch notes:

  • Elise now sits down to do mana meditation instead of doing nothing

  • Elise now gets Salome's permission to hunt the cows first (I had already made this change on the RR version, but for...

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(edited) 29 - Dreams

Patch Notes:

  • Basically nothing

That night, Elise dreamed of Earth. She was back in middle school, when the bullying was at its worst. It was before she got braces to cure her buck teeth, and before s...

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Chapter 21, decoded

This is the last of the decoded chapters. Thank you for your patience, and sorry for the notifications if you had them on.

This time around, Elise was able to get out of the city without a hitch. She got a few glares and a few rotte...

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Chapter 17, decoded

Another dwarf head poked around the corner from the street, and Elise knew she needed to move. Since her stealth had already been blown, she saw no reason to remain landbound anymore, and summoned her wings and flew upward. The dwarf in the window...

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Chapter 13, decoded

Elise barely had time to {Dart} away before a set of jaws with teeth as tall as she was closed around the air where she had just been. As the creature sank back into the dark water, she continued to fly up, as high as she could, until her wings we...

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