The Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 2, Chapter 9
Added 2023-07-20 15:08:01 +0000 UTCEncouraging her company to begin training to perform beyond their usual routines was a simple matter after they had witnessed the mob in the town and understood what had happened.
âJustice without strength is meaningless,â Neia told them. âIf we want our justice to prevail, we must have the strength to ensure that injustice isnât forced upon us!â
Her men didnât yet understand what His Majestyâs justice was, but they understood that the new lives they had made for themselves were being threatened. Neia felt that that was fine for the time being so long as things were heading in the right direction. What didnât feel right was that the whole affair had proven that imminent threats made her message come across to the masses infinitely easier than when the people thought themselves relatively secure. One would think that preventing problems before they happened would be the more common practice.
Just beyond her camp, the men pushed their mounted skills in the fields along the town. At first, she didnât feel comfortable about the idea that it might be perceived as a belligerent threat to the neighbours, but Saye asserted that the exercises along the border were a show of force that would make potential troublemakers think twice before trying anything. Mister JuĂĄrez went back to the villa first thing in the morning along with two men delivering word to Mister Lousa about what happened. Neia wasnât sure how he would react to the news, but she hoped that he would at least take some precautions.
âYou should have sent a stronger warning to Mister Lousa,â Saye told her.
âStronger?â Neia frowned as she eyed the shaft of one of her arrows, âBut we havenât seen any signs of aggression from the town.â
Saye was pretty pessimistic as far as Bards went. Since the previous eveningâs incident, she kept encouraging Neia to be more aggressive with her preparations, talking about the terrible things that happened elsewhere in the world. Some of her stories felt so ridiculous that they may as well have been a Bardâs tale and Neia supposed that they were technically just that.
The Holy Kingdom wasnât a place steeped in crime and corruption like so many of Sayeâs tales, however. Even the events in the town followed an understandable logic that adhered to the laws of the land. All they needed to do was make sure they left no openings for the Nobles to exploit.
âTheyâre called âblind spotsâ for a reason,â Saye told her. âI understand that members of the Paladin order here are trained to be experts in the law, but Nobles are still better at it than you are. By the time you realise what theyâre up to, itâll be too late to do anything about it.â
âYou keep saying that theyâll do something,â Neia replied, âbut they donât even have a motive to do anything like you suggest.â
âHow do you know what their motives are?â Saye asked her.
âPatronage,â Neia said. âGood or bad, Nobles are all about that. Mister Lousa has been doing business with them since the end of the war. If they mess with his ranch, theyâre messing with their investment in his operations.â
âMister JuĂĄrez owed a debt to whoever controls that town,â Saye noted. âThat didnât protect him.â
âThatâsâŠthatâs becauseâŠas much as I hate to say it, thatâs because Mister JuĂĄrez is small. What the Nobles thought they would gain by getting rid of him was worth more than his debt to them. Also, as you said, he served as a warning to everyone else about what happens when one denies the Nobles what they want. His debt also meant that he owed them a favour â turning them down meant he wasnât willing to return that favour.â
It was common sense. The only thing different this time was that the system of patronage had taken an uncharacteristically ugly turn. In the Holy Kingdom, favours and debts were generally seen as the driver for positive things, encouraging people to pursue beneficial outcomes that both strengthened the bonds between people and allowed for the smooth growth of a fief.
The southâs support of the north was predicated on that concept. Debts were necessary to tide things over during the earliest phase of the recovery â the one that they were currently in. They werenât incurred out of some fault of the debtor and werenât financed to give the south a political and economic foothold in the north.
âMister Lousa is different,â Neia continued. âHe has ten thousand cattle purchased from the nobility and heâs a huge source of continued business. Heâs become one of the Nine Colours, too, and thatâs an invaluable connection. I canât imagine any reason why they would threaten anyone like that.â
Mister Lousa got along with everyone, so Neia couldnât imagine anyone holding a grudge against him. The man was simply impossible to hate.
âIf theyâre willing to do what they did to Mister JuĂĄrez,â Saye said, âI think theyâd be willing to do all sorts of things. But youâre the boss.â
The Bard got up and walked over to where the exercises were being conducted. Neia went and did her rounds, but the men at each camp reported nothing out of the ordinary. Still, her eyes kept going to the horizon for signs of trouble.
That evening, the sombre mood that had settled on them grew heavier. The men still sent regular glances at the town, as did she.
âBaraja,â Carlos asked, âdo you think this is happening elsewhere?â
âI donât know,â Neia replied. âWe have no way to tell.â
The mob had gathered in the evening and the fire started after people in the nearby villages would have gone to sleep. There wasnât a trace of smoke by morning, so the only way one could tell if anything had happened was to enter the town itself.
âWeâre honinâ our skills,â another man said, âand thatâs all fine and good, but what if someone does show up to cause trouble? We gonna fight âem?â
The other men looked up from their meals at Neia. Neia returned their grim looks with one of her own.
âI donât like the idea of fighting our own people any more than you,â she said. âBut if they come with the intent to do harm, what other choice do we have? Itâs no different than when Demihumans came to raid our homes, except the threat now comes with twisted laws instead of teeth and claws.â
That part, at least, provided her with a measure of comfort. Saye was right about her men showing their skills being a deterrent â Humans werenât like Demihumans who would have taken it as a challenge. Most Humans did their best to stay away from even imagined violence.
As if to tread upon her hopes for an uneventful evening, the distant sound of pounding hooves roused them to their feet. One of the riders sent to escort Mister JuĂĄrez to the villa appeared on the horizon minutes later. He didnât dismount, taking his horse right up to where they were sitting around the campfire.
âWhatâs going on?â Neia asked.
âWe spotted some men on the way back,â the rider said. âComing up the east road. Gomez is holding them up.â
âWho are they?â
âNo colours that I know.â
The NoblesâŠ
âWhat are they doing here?â
Since they were in unfamiliar colours, they were probably passing through on the way to somewhere else.
Please, just let it be that.
âThey said theyâre after some runaway debtors.â
âDammit!â
Neiaâs frustrated shout echoed into the twilight.
They got usâŠ
She did her best to avoid looking in Sayeâs direction. In hindsight, it was obvious. The pieces were all there, but she hadnât been able to put them together.
Debts didnât just go away when one moved to another territory. Those who financed those debts had every right to pursue them. She should have picked up on what the Nobles were up to when their men in the town allowed them to leave with Mister JuĂĄrez unchallenged. Every man, woman, and child who was indebted to the Nobles was an excuse for them to intrude upon anotherâs territory.
The entire north owed debts to the south. If she turned the Nobles away without suitable justification, the entire establishment would become her enemy. Worse than that, Mister Lousa and everyone who worked for him would be ruined.
How many people has Mister Lousa taken in?
Did he clear their debts or make some other arrangement? While he was a retired army officer who should have some sense of the law, he also served as part of her fatherâs platoon. They were stationed at the wall rather than in the interior where one might be more wise to the Noblesâ tricks.
It was the proverbial alchemical bomb just waiting to go off. If even one of the thousands that worked under Mister Lousa lashed out at the Nobles out of a sense of self-righteousness, they would instantly put everyone on the wrong side of the law.
âWhat do we do?â Carlos asked.
âIâll figure something out on the way,â Neia answered. âWe canât leave Gomez alone with them.â
âYou think theyâd do something?â
If they assaulted one of my men, then at least we couldâŠ
She shook her head free of the thought. What was she asking for?
âI donât know,â Neia said. âBut I donât want us caught off guard if they try. Weâll swing by a few camps before we talk to them. Donât act rashly even if they try to provoke you â we donât want to cause any trouble for Mister Lousa.â
They picked up ranchers from the three camps along their way. Thankfully, Gomez was still there and in one piece. On the road in front of him, a squad of liveried men rushed to form up behind their leader, who sat astride a black warhorse.
Neia took in the details of the men before dismounting beside her subordinate.
An emerald apple over a fess of gules and sableâŠwho?
Unlike the Nobles who could memorise the heraldry of every single house in the kingdom, she only knew the houses that her work regularly brought her into contact with.
âDid they try anything?â She asked in a low voice.
âThey tried starinâ me down, at first,â Gomez replied. âThen they got bored and started lazinâ about.â
âGood,â Neia nodded. âThanks for keeping them here.â
Not only did they lack the discipline of an elite retinue, but they also lacked the equipment. Each of the men on foot was armoured in gambeson and kettle helm with daggers and cudgels as sidearms. None had bows or crossbows, though their spears would be a problem if they were allowed to close. There werenât enough of them to do that, however. Her men could put them all on the ground before they took two steps, if necessary.
If they had come expecting â or looking for â a fight, they would have brought higher-quality retainers or at least more than a squad. They would probably back down if she figured out a legitimate excuse to turn them away.
Neia left her mount with Gomez and approached the unfamiliar retinue. The squad eyed her curiously, but the man on the horse continued watching the fifteen mounted men behind her. She glanced over her shoulder, wondering if they were brandishing their arms, but they werenât.
Well, a line of cavalry is far more threatening than a lone young woman on foot. I need to be polite so the situation doesnât escalate.
It worried her that the manâs mindset didnât completely discount the possibility of violence. Neia took her eyes off of her men and looked back up at the rider before her.
âYour name and house, good sir?â She asked.
The rider didnât answer. Behind him, his squad visibly lost all of their tension.
âExcuse mââ
âIf this is a joke,â the manâs voice went straight past her, âit is in extraordinarily poor taste.â
Huh?
Several moments passed in silence. The man scoffed.
âSurely, you do not mean to say that this little girl is speaking for the lot of you? For Iago Lousa, one of the Nine Colours? Have you no one better qualified?â
Hey! I may not be a great beauty, but Iâm a woman grown, thank you!
Neia bristled as a mire of ugly memories from the war rose to the forefront of her mind. Though she was known as the Sorcerer Kingâs Squire, that association was only really made amongst the leadership and those who had embraced His Majestyâs wisdom. When she went around the army camps without her equipment or surcoat, she just became another nameless woman. Random people would just dump camp chores on her and, despite her antagonistic appearance, she had even been propositioned a few times by officers looking to entertain their men.
It made her want to walk around all the time with the Sorcerer Kingâs equipment on, but, in the end, that just made her lose even more confidence in herself.
âWeâve wasted enough time here,â the man said. âI understand that many commoners harbour fantasies of serving as a âknightâ under some âprincessâ, but at least find a woman of proper breeding to offer your services to. Well, not that you have much of a choice.â
The squad leader nudged his mount forward. Neia didnât move.
âYou didnât answer my question, good sir.â
âI donât answer to little girls.â
Fifteen crossbows came up in response to the manâs words. His warhorse stopped within two centimetres of Neiaâs face. It was definitely a stupid idea to stand inside his measure, but she couldnât give up any ground. The manâs lip curled into a sneer.
âWhat is the meaning of this?â
âYouâre trespassing on Iago Lousaâs land without just cause,â Neia told him.
âDid they not tell you, you stupid girl?â The man sneered, âRunaway debtors have crossed into Lousaâs land.â
âWould you happen to be carrying proof of each individualâs debt?â
The man glared down at her.
Eh? He doesnât?
Neia thought he would have at least brought copies with him. She was just going down a checklist of things that she might be able to delay him with, but she had scored a blow with the very first point. Was the squad dispatched as a favour from one house to another? It would explain the unknown livery and incomplete preparations.
âIn that case,â Neia took a step back so she could smile up at the man, âI am afraid we cannot grant you passage.â
âAre you questioning our honour?â The man grated.
âI cannot question the crown laws,â Neia replied. âIf you have any grievances with those, I suggest that you take them up with the Royal Court. If you insist on continuing with your unjustified intrusion, weâll be putting you down as a band of nameless brigands.â
ââŠâ
She continued to smile under the manâs furious glare. It was only after the light of their torches disappeared over the hill to the east that she allowed herself to breathe a sigh of relief. Still, in the end, he hadnât given his name or that of the house that he served so she had no clue who they were dealing with.
âNeia,â Saye said.
âHm?â
âYouâre an idiot.â
Neia buried her face in her hands, going red to her ears. She really was an idiot. How could she let things escalate so quickly? Was she that easy to goad?
âI thought weâd have to toss their corpses in the kingswood,â Carlos said, âso I figure this is a win.â
âKilling them might have been better,â Saye said. âTheyâll definitely be back. With how Miss Smiley Murderface here turned them away, itâll be with a lot more men.â
ArghâŠ
Her fatherâs smile had people assume he committed at least four atrocities per day and Neia inherited that part of him. Those men probably thought she was a psychopathic mass murderer now.
âItâs worse than that,â Neia said. âI sort of tricked them using their common sense.â
âHow so?â Carlos asked.
âMister Lousa isnât a Noble,â Neia answered. âHeâs just a really big tenant. I figure that heâll be enfeoffed whenever his ceremonial induction into the Nine Colours is.â
ââŠwhy is that a problem? Heâs still a direct tenant of the Holy King, isnât he?â
âYeah, but heâs not a tenant-in-chief. In other words, not a Noble who directly answers to the Holy King. He has no right to enact laws or enforce them. He canât grant titles, collect taxes, or do anything else that a Noble can do. Thatâs pretty much why he does things the way that he does. No one working for him has a tenancy because he legally canât grant titles. Theyâre all just âemployeesâ.â
Mister Lousa was in an undoubtedly strange situation that was only made possible by the catastrophic sequence of events that came with Jaldabaothâs invasion. The Holy Kingdom didnât make laws on the assumption that the country would be half destroyed with barely functioning or entirely absent government institutions. Following the war, everyone assumed that things would return to normal within a few years, so enacting new legislation to address the problem was considered a needless effort.
âSo the only organisations with judicial authority on Mister Lousaâs land are the Royal Army and the Holy Order?â Saye asked.
âOn paper,â Neia replied. âIn practice, it was just me and my partner back when I was still part of the Holy Order. We showed up once every two weeks as part of a big patrol around the north of Hoburns. I canât imagine how long it takes now with just my former partner doing it. With the Royal Army out of the country, Mister Lousa canât even petition the Holy King for protection because the Holy King has nothing to protect him with.â
The only thing she could be thankful for was that the âholeâ in the Holy Kingdomâs judicial framework was overlooked when the southern Nobles came to take up policing duties in the cities.
âYou said that the Holy King doesnât have anything to protect us with since the Royal Armyâs out of the country,â Carlos said. âBut canât he just tell whoeverâs trying to stir up trouble with us to stop?â
âNo,â Neia said. âThatâs why I specifically linked the issue to the crown laws. If I had framed things as a problem with Mister Lousa, weâd lose by default.â
âHow? Those guys were clearly the ones lookinâ to start shit.â
âIn every kingdom and empire that I know of,â Neia said, âa liege is obliged to defend their vassals in court. And by vassals, I mean the Noble sort. Since the dispute would be Lord whoever versus Iago Lousa, Mister Lousa wouldnât have any representation because heâs just a tenant and lords are supposed to represent their tenants.â
ââŠand he doesnât have a lord to represent him in court.â
âIn a normal situation,â Neia replied, âMister Lousa would be the lord, and a powerful one, at that. No one would dare to challenge him in his demesne.â
âSo, where does that leave us?â Saye asked.
âMister Lousaâs land is basically a weird pseudo-frontier where effectively no one has the legal right to uphold justice. We need to hold our own here until Mister Lousa is granted his title, and we have to do it in such a way that the Nobles canât level substantial charges against him in the Royal Court. Even thatâs iffy because, right now, the Nobles are operating as if theyâre dealing with another Noble on that Nobleâs land. If they ever realise that theyâve fallen victim to their own common sense, weâre going to be in trouble.â
âThen what do we do now, specifically?â Carlos asked, âWhat can we do? You make it sound as if weâve been hogtied.â
âFirst of all, weâll have to let Mister Lousa know what happened. Beyond that, we have to keep strengthening ourselves. You saw it just now â itâs as I said, justice without strength is meaningless. We all know that that squad is enough to convince entire villages to let them do what they want. Thatâs probably what they thought their task would be: searching villages for their targets.
âI know it troubles you that weâre resorting to the threat of force, but thatâs ultimately the only sure way to make them stop and listen. That Knight was intent on riding right over me â a âlittle girlâ. Heâd have done the same to you, saying that he doesnât answer to âpeasantsâ. If any one of us had confronted him alone, we wouldnât have had the strength to uphold our justice.â
âYou keep sayinâ âour justiceâ,â one of her men said. âBut what does that mean? Right now, it seems that weâre usinâ âstrengthâ to force a favourable outcome. We want to protect the lives that weâve made here and thatâs a pretty normal thing. You make it sound as if everyone should be lookinâ out for their own interestsâŠbut thatâs a sure way to start a million feuds thatâll only end when one side stamps out the other.â
Most of the other ranchers nodded along with his words. How events had played out did make things seem like they were as he said.
âJaldabaoth was strong,â Neia said. âStrong enough to do whatever he wanted. But Jaldabaoth was not justice. To find justice, we must look to His Majesty the Sorcerer King, who is the incarnation of justice! His Majesty used his strength not to torment the weak, but to aid us in our time of need. He risked himself to help strangers like us. It is obvious who we must look to for wisdom and guidance!â
ââŠI donât think any of us can be like the Sorcerer King,â Carlos said.
âIâm not saying that we can be,â Neia replied. âAt least not physically. But we can be like His Majesty in spirit! We must all strive to shed the sin of weakness â of complacency and powerlessness â and improve ourselves so that we are free to follow our justice! Unlike the Sorcerer King, our adversary is not Jaldabaoth. What we face are mere mortals like you and me: people who intend to inflict injustice upon us and everything we care about.â
Her men still seemed unconvinced, but Neia felt that she was making better progress than she had just a day ago. So long as she could keep nudging them on the right path, they would eventually come to see the truth.
Is it alright to use someone like this?
Saye was pretty sure that Neia Baraja was broken in the head.
Lord Demiurgeâs orders were to assist her primary target in the creation of an âideological vanguardâ for her social movement, which would be instrumental in bringing change to the Holy Kingdom of Roble. This change was crucial in a country shaped by the heretical mess otherwise known as the Faith of the Four, which had a proven history of opposing the Sorcerer King wherever his influence expanded.
Since the end of Jaldabaothâs invasion, a great deal of experimentation and observation had gone into determining the effect and extent of Neia Barajaâs capabilities. They concluded that, in addition to being a certain type of Paladin, she was some type of Commander. It wasnât a conventional military one: it instead seemed to be related to belief or conviction and had abilities themed along those lines â perhaps something like a Missionary or an Evangelist.
Lord Demiurge told her that the Sorcerer King hadnât expressed any desire to be openly worshipped, however, so they were to facilitate the creation of an easily digestible moral philosophy rather than a religion. That, in turn, would guide the people of the Holy Kingdom into a worldview that was compatible with the culture developing in the Sorcerous Kingdom. That culture, of course, would also serve as a gateway to religious conversion should their god wish for it.
Her current situation, however, was rife with challenges. Foremost amongst them was the fact that the current form of Neiaâs âmessageâ wasnât coherent at all. To Saye and anyone else who didnât share the same experiences, it came across as deluded at best. The strangest thing about it was that Neia herself understood the problem and was a generally level-headed person right up to the point where she started âsharingâ. All logic and reason flew out the window after that. It was to the extent that Saye wondered if Neia had just brainwashed herself with her own message and was stuck going in circles with it.
The main problem with Neiaâs message was her arbitrary way of attributing bits of âwisdomâ to the Sorcerer King. Saye was pretty sure that His Majesty wasnât like Neiaâs image of him at all. When the Sorcerer King walked around E-Rantel, he never went on about strength or justice or sin being a weakness. Rather than any of that, he expressed his pleasure over the fact that his people were happy and his kingdom continued to develop in a positive direction. His citizens were encouraged to thrive doing the things that they were good at for the benefit of society and their collective prosperity, which â paraphrased â was one of the core tenets of the Faith of the Six.
Well, thereâs no use griping about it. Itâs my job to make her thingy marketable. I just have to make sure it doesnât conflict with any tenets of the faith.
Saye had a sort of kind of time limit when it came to preparing Neia for her main role. The rapidly deteriorating state of the Holy Kingdom was purposely engineered by Lord Demiurge and his agents in the Holy Kingdom to rebuild the countryâs industrial base at all costs, rip up the old cultural regime, and put its people in a mental state that was highly susceptible to Neiaâs oratory abilities. Neia needed to start taking advantage of the situation because letting too much time pass would see the Holy Kingdom fall apart.
Thus, the equipment that the Sorcerer King had lent to Neia had been recalled to mitigate the risk of her going on any âdetoursâ â she was supposed to grow as an orator, not as an Archer or a Paladin. Neiaâs modest following, the Sorcerer King Rescue Corps, was serving as a âcontrol sampleâ to see how old âconvertsâ would react to refinements to Neiaâs message and changes in their âenvironmentâ.
As Saye lay in her bedroll, pondering Neiaâs developmental trajectory for the foreseeable future, a Shadow Demon phased through the ceiling of her tent. It had been hanging around her for most of the day â probably because Neia kept sharing stories of the Sorcerer Kingâs greatness â so it made for a convenient scout when Saye needed one. She reached up to activate the Silence item sitting by her pillow.
âWhat did you find out?â Saye asked.
âThe rider and his squad returned to the previous town,â the Shadow Demon answered. âThey conferred with another group of men at the inn.â
âWhat colours were they wearing?â
âMany men. Many colours. The most important person was wearing stripes of red and blue.â
âHouse Cohen,â Saye nodded.
âCohenâŠâ
The name seeped out of the Demonâs mouth like a poisonous mist. It seemed that the men that had been stopped at the border were the vanguard of the scions Saye had overheard discussing their plans in The Queen of Thorns.
âWhat did they say?â
Several moments went by before the Shadow Demon spoke again.
âLord Eduardo, this outcome is absolutely unacceptable. That bitch needs to be put in her place for this brazen challenge!â
The Shadow Demon shifted over and faced the empty space where it was once floating.
âWe were just testing the waters, Aquino. The remainder of our forces will be joining us overnight. Weâll leave in the afternoon after everyone receives their assignments.â
The Shadow Demon changed places again, crossing its arms.
âMy man wants that girl who turned him away.â
âDoesnât he know that being so persistent will only make women hate him?â
ââŠâ
âIt was a joke,â the Shadow Demon's chuckle didn't sound quite like a Humanâs. âThey had three hundred men, you said?â
âAll mounted and armed.â
âWe'll send ten Knights to break them up.â
âTwenty. Also, I assume we have an answer for those crossbows that theyâre usingâŠâ
The Shadow Demon scoffed.
âAs if a ragtag band of cowherds wouldnât break as soon as something substantial comes their way. Theyâre not Demihumans, Aquino, nor do they have a leader to command them.â
âWe still need to make sure they donât escape to cause trouble elsewhere.â
ââŠfine. But remember that the remainder of our task only consists of exerting pressure on Iago Lousa. Weâre not here to thoughtlessly butcher productive elements.â
âOf course, Lord Eduardo.â
HmmâŠ
Saye reached up and patted the Shadow Demon on the head.
âYou have a good memory,â she smiled. âWhat do you think the Noblesâ chances are?â
The Shadow Demon shrugged. She supposed that it wouldnât bother with that sort of assessment when it could probably wipe out both sides on its own.
Saye considered the conversation and the probable effects of the royalistâs actions. The scions were very aggressive as far as the Holy Kingdom went, but it still wasnât enough.
âI have a job for you,â she told the Shadow Demon. âThis is a perfect opportunity for us to give Neia a little nudge along the right path; it would be a shame if we let it go to waste.â
Comments
''It was to the extent that Saye wondered if Neia had just brainwashed herself with her own message and was stuck going in circles with it.'' Lol she fucked herself with her own orator skill xDD
Zarik0
2023-07-21 05:10:51 +0000 UTCWhat a big contrast with her brother :o
Seri
2023-07-20 23:40:47 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Gopard
2023-07-20 21:37:07 +0000 UTCIdeological vanguardâs & evangelical paladins, now weâre talking!
Colin Love
2023-07-20 16:36:29 +0000 UTCSaye knows what's actually going on in the Holy Kingdom, and still wonders whether it's fine to manipulate Neia.
DecaDeca
2023-07-20 15:37:57 +0000 UTC