Legacy - Dusk Chapter 5
Added 2017-06-09 19:37:16 +0000 UTCAgain, comments are encouraged!
Comments
Intriguing chapter! Like the female overseer.
LuckyMagus
2017-06-26 07:46:48 +0000 UTCMy god I'm so nervous.
DemonicAlpha
2017-06-10 04:20:58 +0000 UTCInto the belly of the beast. :)
Marcwolf
2017-06-09 23:55:45 +0000 UTCYou have this uncanny ability to make me growl in frustration every time I realize the chapter is over...Well played...
Silwer
2017-06-09 20:04:45 +0000 UTCHa! Dang. Now I need to know what Ahsan is thinking. I was holding my breath SO hard when she checked the shackles there near the end. Ignorance is so bliss. This is all playing out like a really fun, if unfortunate, video game mission in my head XD Honestly don't have much feedback though. It all flowed really well. Cant wait for more!
Connor Laleff
2017-06-09 20:04:29 +0000 UTC
