Script for Legendary Chapter One, Page 3
Added 2017-08-26 17:23:02 +0000 UTCThanks to hitting our $6000/month Milestone Goal, Patrons get to see my original script page now in addition to the regular updates.
Enjoy!
Comments
I love that you wrote the character idea of noticing the tension in his clenched fist. I will say that I did lose that idea in the final. Its there, but I don't think I'd have understood it without reading the pages. Just an FYI. No criticism. The impulse intended in the script is exactly right. Thank you AW!
Chris Dangerfield
2017-08-27 22:25:27 +0000 UTC
